damn.... originality, wordplay and metaphors were off the hizzle.... only problem was flow.... multi's.... structure.... fix those and dude you'll dope and locked.... i liked this.... thanks for the drop.... hope you improve.... cause you've got a dope potential.... JUST TAKE THE ADVICE I'm GIVING YOU.... you're original.... don't let anyone tell how to be original.... but where technique is concerned.... you need it.... flow, multi's, structure....