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Originally posted by The Necromancer
The only technical problem was when I read it the flow seemed a bit off. Certain lines longer/shorter then the others. But besides that it's good stuff.
~SHALOM~
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This was a nice piece..as eerybody else said sounded more like a rap song than anything...i still liked it though..as written above it lacked in flow..but that didn't change the quality of the piece..DEUCES