ok lemme break this shiznit down...[thats right i said shiznit ]...

mad man:

you verse shined in places, and just frankly, didnt in others...

examples of shining:

And the streets where they fought were soaked in blood indeed
And when the blood poars through the streets, then the clouds start to bleed
And the blood is absorbedin these clouds, and to rain it gives birth
The tears of dead brethren lost in heaven, splash down upon the earth

last 2 were dope

example of not shining:

Jeremy believed in life after death
But to learn of death after life, left him short of breath
For heaven wasn't at all what he'd expected
Reading the bible he thought his afterlife would be protected

idk just didnt flow with me

overall u had a good verse, not bad, not great, a good one...6.4/10


t square

your verse was good too..

example of good:

Like I rember back in ninety three, and my uncle passed from HIV,
The only man to raise or praise me from a baby, gone instantly,

example of weak:

your intro (sorry the first 4 lines were kinda weak)


Verdict: I would have voted t's way if he would ave came with a better opener...mad man had the better concept, but t executed his shit (besides the intro) a wee bit better...mm's flow was not perfect, but neither was t's....this is a close ass battle but imm say MAD MAN just cuz of t's intro...t, its not that mad mans was better then yours, you had the chanc to bring the beating on a subpar verse from MM and you flopped the intro, the most important part of the verse...you defeated yourself