the beat is really calm and soothing...but the flow was like..rambling..and you sound real muffled, or far from the mic or some shit...but your intents were good...the lyrics are very very deep...i like the lyrics a lot, if you molded ya flow a little more this track could be so fuckin ill...cuz the message is no doubt moving...i feel shit like this, but the quality & sound was real shaky, but props none-the-less...nice work....

.peace.

oh and could you peep my track..."Simplicity" its posted up out on the Song Page...thanks

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