yo nice short peice, this site is full of slept on peices, everysingle one of mine have been slept on since ive been here. but jus keep doin what u do and if u need some critiquing im happy to do it, back to the peice, nice wordplay, bad flow at sometimes but that can get better, try making a longer peice, like a song with a corus, good luck man

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