This was a solid peice. Almost. I mean, it had a simplistic voice, but it was well utilized. Really the only problem was that the lines were very choppy. I'm sure you did this on purpose, but it's rough for those like me who always take a pause at the end of each lines.

But even despite the structure, everything came across well.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.