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Old 09-20-03, 09:12 PM   #13
Symilee
a perfect imperfection...
 
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sweet and simple..................street had more punches. Better ones too, there were some in there that made me laugh. Good flow as well, and wordplay........overall a better verse. Only one thing about it was the CAPS and '''' in the verse, id reduce that next time, but ur verse beat billys, no doubt. Vote = SL

please vote honestly on this, its getting slept on.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78434

peace...........................
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