I have to say this was a good piece, good rhyme scheme and worplay, good vocab, had some good flow but it kinda got thrown off a lil bit at certain parts but all in all good piece I enjoyed readin it considering the fact that u made ur pen seem like a person which is rather interesting but keep it up.

check out mine and Masta C's drop called "life is what we hate (ft. Masta C) thanx in advance if u do leave some feedback please. peace

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