The first one was nice. It was something personal to you, but you still brought it 'out' to the reader. I like short pieces. And you compressed yours fairly well...

The second one was also good. Bringing an atmosphere with so few words. Though i felt ther ending could've been done a bit better...overall, it was very nice.

Liked both. You seem to be a good short poem writer of sorts..keep them coming please...

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