was a good piece man I enjoyed readin it. nice use of vocab but ur rhyme scheme could use some work. it had an alright flow through the whole thing and all in all I thought it was a pretty good peice so keep droppin bro.

oh and don't forget to check out mine and masta c's open mic called "this life we hate (ft Masta C)" and also our newest one which I will be posting sometime today called "high times" also featuring Masta C so keep an eye out for it and leave some feedback. thanx in advance peace.

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