2 words bro. needs work. no offence or nuttin I think u do have the ability to bust somethin good but try to rap on a topic and ur structure and rhyme scheme and what not needs work. now unless ur juss screwin around with this peice to try somethin new I dunno then that's fine and I'm sorry for inconvenience if u were juss screwin around with this piece. but if u got the time peep out mine and masta C's collab called "life is what we hate (ft. Masta C) and leave some feedback and also I'll be postin a new collab by us called "high times" so if ur still around peep that out to. thanx in advance peace.

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