yo man tight verse. I couldn't really see what u were getting at but as far as rhyme scheme, wordplay, vocab, mulit's, flow it was all good. tight strong rhyme bro. and look out for mine and masta c's new rhyme whach I will be posting sometime today called "high times" and leave some feedback. thanx in advance peace.

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