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Old 09-21-03, 02:30 PM   #8
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Not a Bad Battle....here is the analysis

13th:
Good verse...really felt it..it was simple but grabbed..not many problems with it..lacked wordplay compared to Quotient but other than that it was solid.

Quotient:
Good concept and the imagery for this was really good. I just didn't get the feeling of it. It was a solid verse..Lacked vocab in a couple spots but nothing major.

VOTE: 13th
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