Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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it was a good piece, it was a nice story, worth reading it. lots of detail in spots, and in other spots i wanted to know more about it.
i agree it was choppy, but you had to read it twice at least to get it right, and then when you did it sounded better.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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