its an okay verses, some parts seemed forced and some bars strectched out into two

for example
Ur defenseless like Natives tryin to Defend they own Lands, Ur shits broke like little kids makin money off lemonaid stands/

that can't be one bar duke and btw, its best to write yer shit in bar format than like a paragraph

lot of ppl like to see flow and hate to be the one that have to decipher your flow by re-reading, it should be obvious at start

neways, when the battle starts i'll vote on dis ish