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Old 09-21-03, 10:27 PM   #8
Calisto
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Nicely written got a lil thrown off after the mother nature's soul as far as rythm went, but I liked the intensity of it. I loved the third line, 'specially the first part of it. Kinda wished it would have rhymed but that's your perogative. Nice drop, definatly deep and definatly something that was powerful in it's length. Peace
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