some of x's lines were played ie. $3 bill, tack back shit like that
x's best lines:This bitch just checked in to the merk hotel so bid him farewell/
His verse coulda been wrote by a demon and still wouldn't be hot as hell
Your flow is simplistic but mine is mystic and my mind is sadistic/
Don't fuck with someone who idealistic that's how you become just another statistic//

white you need to fix ur structure and shorten your lines
whites best: why u even start shit,watch me bruise this dick head like a rock hard clit,when u hear this gun blast u know where u "headed" mutha fucka the only way u elevatin is if u gettin lifted by a "paramedic"/
now watch me take all the bitches and string em up like "lanters"this little bitch holds more nuts then a bucket of "planters"/ <<hit real hard towards the end
vote=white nightmare for an overall better verse and harder hitting punches, keep elevating...good battle

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