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Originally posted by filed
sharp glistening nails
long slim fingers
two uneven dimples
a strawberry scent that lingers
long full lashes
thin pale lips
small painted toes
curvey female hips
smooth shaven legs
streaked red hair
sun kissed skin
a beautiful body bare
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What I find amazing here is how well you described me. Y'know... except for the dirty nails, the knotty fingers, the lack of deoderant scent, the stubby lashes, the fat pink lips, the incredibly long toes, the squared hips, the hairy legs, the afro hair, the computer screen light kissed skin, and the clothes.
Huh... In retrospect I guess you didn't describe me at all. Just what I wished I look liked.
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yet a stomach slowly growing
alittle more each day
althought she may be gorgeous
cant you hear what she has to say!
she isnt very strong
look past her pretty face
she trys to please everyone
thou it hurts to move at your pace!
she said she wasnt ready
she said she wasnt sure
this time she spoke up
but her comments you ignored
you used her for your pleasure
you told her hurtful lies
you left her by herself
used and trashed to die!
your eyes only saw her beauty
never heard what she had to say
now shes found stiff and cold
two souls YOU killed today!
rather a personal piece, written more to get pictures and feeling out, but still looking to what you have to say
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And then comes the part of seriosnissity. I mean, you sure know how to bring someone down. But only becaue it's depressing.
You never mentioned in this peice what actually happened in so many words. Which is to say you never actually straight out said the word rape. But I can tell that is what happened. And the pregnancy I'm assuming was in it. And then both her and her child dying.
I can only assume you were the 'her' in this peice, and that is why it is personal. Or maybe the child, or maybe the guy. Either way your peice was still felt and it was touching. Touching in a sort of "how can anyone be so heartless?" sort of way.
I dunno what else to say. I'm just not down with rape. Maybe if it was consensual, y'know like role-playing. But the only role playing I'm down with involves video games or dice.
Since I dunno what else to say, I'll shut up.
~Shalom~