Yeah, this was pretty dope my man, nicely told story, you made the transitions smoothly to keep the piece moving along but not too quickly, flow was decent as i read it, multi's were there but i felt you could of used more internal-multi's in this piece to really strengthen it. Overall though i liked this, really got into the story of it, made for a nice read.

Props.

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