aiight first off THIS PIECE WAS ILL!!good vocab,nice imagery,nice structure although it was a bit choppy,good rhyme scheme,you got straight to tha point,you could've added a few more multis and abit better wordplay but all in all i rate this at an 8 out of 10,the reason it isnt a 9 is because i dig multis ALOT,so a few more of those and i wouldve rated this wit a 9,over all nice piece though,keep droppin tha hotness.~!~