Im so Sick and Tired of seeing my own Life Fade
ive Pay more Tolls then Death & still i havent Paid.
Nice Line
Ingulfed in Hate - im Gods one and only Mistake
so i Hide from those that made me disown my Fate.
Tight
im Building up Rage, i could Burst at any Moment
my Atoms part, because my death lurks Upon Them.
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those Hurtful Comments - i feel im the Scum of Earth
i even despise myself. .my life has nothing, no Worth.
Coolness
im blessed with pains Curse, im hated for Entertainment
marks on my soul, where those words En-Graved In.
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never given a chance - no notions of Apologies
so I let my anger out here. .with in this Tripology
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Im so sick and tired of being the Sick and Tired View in the Distance
that Persistant Youthfull Indifferent hidden below Truthfull Eclipses.
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these lunar linguistics from the God seen odyssey of our Tri-Pology,
are offering a Bargain Plee in Anonymousity to be-rid of the Poverty.
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Honestly, i could Count My Blessings with One Hand, rule of thumb
Youth unsung gettin into the Swing of things, w/ a crystal Pendulum,
Nice vocab
That Fuels The Sum of this Alumini, to the Human Eye, i Design Fate
Mature with Age like a Fine Wine, walking this Time Line til it breaks.
Nice Flow
Primate Descendant placed Rhyme to Sentence and forgotten respect
creating a Positive Effect, they who Seek the Peak of the Opposite Sex
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Often whats left is unwanted love, many hearts broken and following,
and Your the joke Their Swallowing, as Love completes our Tri-Pology.
This was coolness right here best part in ya verse..

This was a good open mic piece there were no flaws so keep this coming mang 1..