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Originally posted by FaZe²
im only trying to help when i say this so please dont get mad, to me when i read this i felt like you were searching for any decent size word and rhymed with it, this open mic made no sense to me. I felt like all i was reading was a bunch of words, mistaken for a verse. Try thinking about something and then write about it with the words that actually express it.
Good Luck!
FaZe²
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Yeah i agree with what he says you`ll get it just keep trying and write about something that you know something about and make sure it has some good wordplay and metas and a lil bit of vocab and you`ll be str8 1.. |