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damn. well, this was a good one.
Chrit- dude, first topical? pretty sick. If you made it longer, it would be much better. Your flow was a little off at times, but the content was off the hook. Your opener was as cool as they get, facade is a great word.
Bruk- Nice shit dude. You took a perspective that I didn't expect. I liked the twisting of the topic. Only bad thing was the quotations.
"sure, my parents fed me...but only enough"
Dopeness.
vote-bruk
just an overall better verse.
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