"im only trying to help when i say this so please dont get mad, to me when i read this i felt like you were searching for any decent size word and rhymed with it, this open mic made no sense to me. I felt like all i was reading was a bunch of words, mistaken for a verse. Try thinking about something and then write about it with the words that actually express it."

I agree with this guy completely, your style is hard to read to

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