Ok Im gonna break this down
C-drama, you first
I bruise your nerves when I loosely curse contusive verbs//
You's been merked~thrown away like a fuse that's burnt//

^^nice opener, good use of multi's, didn't hit too hard but a nice way to open.

When I use the bird you [fall] like it was [deuce the third]//(First day of Autumn->23rd)
The news was heard~his mom's crying when this dude's in urns//

^^not bad....decent punch

This useless turd's more PLAYED OUT than the ORIGIN OF YOUR NAME//
He gon switch KEN for his name when I leave his clothes like the FLUID IN YA VEIN//

^^blah, didnt like this, maybe it was cuz you repeated name twice.

.......are you insane? ~ I'm the sickest of em all//
And we all sick of ya mom ~ posting "IN MEMORY OF" PICTURES ON THE WALL//

^^ok, poor structure, decent bar.

....It's a sad world....but everybody's gotta go//
....and by the way....tell ya pops I said hello (haha)//

^^blah.

Overall-ok verse, ok wordplay, ok punches, ok flow. Lol, pretty average verse not too good not too bad. 5/10

Capcom-

C-Drama, lil dirty bitch if I.C.U. you will See Drama
I'm tear your brain out ya skull & fed ex it to ya mama

^^bad opener, where's the creativity?

Like a Thugged out teacher, He wanna test my gangsta
So I'ma Turn my test in wit Mack 11's & serve this wanksta

^^might as well have rhymed pussy and wussy, once again not hard-hitting, no creativity.

GoT Beef? And I'll shank ya, I dont give a fuck about You
If I put ya Life on a scale from 1-10...Bitch u'd rank about 2.

^^wack, not hard hittinh, bad punch, blah.


C_Drama? If U'd of kept ya mouth shut, I'd a left u alone
Like ya girlfriend did when You bought ya Fag Boyfriend Home

^^best bar in your verse, still weak though, blah.


Dawg its over, the crowd is still laughin at u cuz of my verse
Just remember when you people poll I'm in the 2nd slot, Not 1st

^^um...where is the punch exactly?

Overall-man what the hell was that? I though that verse was wack, honestly. Maybe it was cuz you didn't have much time to type it up. If that's so, then next time don't let anyone rush you, just take your time and use some creativity.1/10

Vote=C-drama