This was a decent piece, basically stating your back which isnt too original, flow was decent in this, vocab was a little basic, you had multi'sd in there which helped towards the flow of this piece, not many internals which you may want to think about working on, there was no real 'wordplay' in this, so i dunno what Diverse was reading. . overall, the piece was too short to really get into, didnt have anything eye-openingly brilliant but for whats there it was decent.

Ditch the // at the end of your lines, they make you look like a newbie.

Peace!

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