Shiznit's Thoughts:

As far as my perspectives on it. This piece was extraordinary. It started on defining a character of a brave centurion warrior then compared him to legendary battlers of history. The imagery regained a strong aura that made the piece very much intact. How the words are incorporated and used enhanced such a positive aspect of a true writing. A man of honor from thousands of years ago are described using comparisons of epic history...but as i see it... It can be rheotrical and made it possible to just describe a simple man getting through out of the wars thats coming through and from his life. The storm that circulates back and forth but still like a cactus standing firm not hesistating the wounds that caused him.

I am pretty much impressed of the deep terminology executed throughout. It had a very much incredible flow i followed from top to bottom. Reluctant Imagery surpassed mostly. Even settings were description-wise and its as if you can feel the sweat and the blood from the battle. Imagery made it possible.

Its kinda funny how some kids just let a good piece sweep away and just sayin..'its good'...'not bad'...'holla at my piece'. Its kinda annoying really. But i hope you enjoyed my retarded criticism.

A Piece not be wasted.

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