Shiznit's Thoughts:

Before anything else..8 views 0 replies? wtf? *shakes head* Kids these days. Appreciation of writing is beyond at the back of their brains now. Thats horrible.

Alright....lets see. Your introduction assumingly that you were portraying about your mind being your outer space metaphorically speaking. Reviving how you trans-over the topic from actually talking about an outer space but very much an empty space waiting to be filled in. It was broken down to a massive metaphors that was fed up ur mind and kept it closed. But as i read further down..it seems to me that you were actually out there looking down to how the life people are living in their own ways nowadays.

"Let Me Weigh The Sun; Earth's Already On My Back"

^For me that was an awesome line and yet its true. I am really impressed on this line. I am not in particulary sure why but the meaning of it and how it was created was very much an excitement for me. I liked it. no no no. I loved it.

Your words are on to the point where you can really feel what you wanted to execute from the start.

"Light Will Just Abandon; Thought Is All That's Left
Are You Ready To Go Steady With A Fate Worse Than Death?"

^Finisher was actually the best part. Its always been. Of course the fact that being thrown out of space is defintely worst than death. Cuz out there is a neverending bottom. Youll just die of hunger thats for sure. BUt the fact still remains that you dont have to go to outer space to have that fate. The world see it through a mirror. It can happen...and yet..u can avoid it.

Great piece man.

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