O0o0o0oh, Poetic Type Piece. .
I felt this on more of a poetic vibe than anything else, the flow wasnt there for me, it always seemed to be like. . one syl;lable out or something and i couldnt quite catch on, it was too short to really grasp and get into, but i thought it was decent for what was there, vocab its strongpoint, flow its weakest, add more multi's / internals instead of leaving it at basic one syllablke rhymeing, and drop the whole Sureal-esque structure of breaking up the bars, no one's feelin` it but Sureal, lol.
It was decent, should of been better, would of been better if more planned out / worded slightly and given flow.
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