^ I love you.

Girl always has replies like that, she never posts without breaking it down. .
Anyways, nice piece nucca, flowed pretty nicely as i read it, i see you got the internals in there a lot more now, thats good, but try to make them internal-multi's - that way their waaaaay more effective, good use of multi's, nice wording, i liked your take on the topic - it was a little short but ehhh, it was pre-season so i can see why you didnt try too hard. Werd to the sun line, that was a standout, i liked that a lot, all in all not a bad drop.

You tickled the sloth, nucca!

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