Nice Nice Nice piece.

Your flow to me was your shining point. Also, your vocabulary also shined here, but at alot of points, you seem to fall off.

Their Morals, You'll Find It's The Same Old Story
"The Bible Is A Fable And Church Just Bores Me"
I Deplore Thee; Afore You Get Lost In Outer Space
Recede Into My Dimention; It's Life W/o Her Grace


I loved these lines, ^
There was nice imagery here and there, but I couldn't get a complete picture of what you were saying, and i was confused at some points. It wasn't common, but it was there at some points. This was a good piece, had a little bit of everything needed. Peace

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and that...is cool.