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Old 09-22-03, 07:09 PM   #5
Pugilist
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First two verses were pretty good, then i felt you guys kinda lost what ya had in the next two, but the last two it was picked back up, good multi's, i'd say uppin your vocab would help, but this was pretty good.
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