One: lemme say, dont try to up da skill of ur verse, someone may think its wack???

Two: even saying that, your verse was good holmes lol and he mispelled the word dunny

Three: the break down

Flow = Brain
Punches = Brain
Creativity = Brain (Like dat "xl? Fo real?") line lol
Metas = Not much
Wordplay = Brain

1 sided battle

Vote = Brain
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