flow was very good cam sed it pretty much
overall liked the concept and the originality
some standout lines which ill quote....

'My Mind Is My World, Or Whats Left Of It Anyways
Bottled Inside, With My Pride, For So Many Days
Let Me Weigh The Sun; Earth's Already On My Back
Seal Up My Inner Space; A Fortress You Can't Hack
^the flow of it really made it dope.liked the imagery right there

the rope line was nice too
the end really made a point as well...good way to finish it
vocabulary was very good...no wife strife life shit
u might call it werd..