I'll start with the bad that you guys can work on
Rappad: not much to say, good verse, but the (w) and (l) rhymes are getting played...
Saracen:Better then when i battled you...still need to elevate abit and the played line was the one with the vet battlin the newb...because both of you accepted...

The good:
Rappad: best line- "you beat an older rhymer then william shakespher" lmao <<hit hard and was original
Saracen: best line- "your attack cant penetrate, like a dick goin into a metal plate, tryin to mate" <<hit alright, good attempt at multies

Punches-rappad
vocab-rappad
wordplay-rappad
flow-rappad
multis-saracen
vote=rappad
good battle...keep elevatin
vote here if you havent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80972