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ya lines were too short, but you kept the flow nice, awsome key, couldn't tell if it was really cuz its like you dropped a bomb shell man, you're multis added up along the way, but fucked up ure rhymescheme when you used it man. your metas n similies were needed, you lacked a lil, but they were kinda there... your topic was a lil off, bounced kinda like fat titties, but over all it was a nice drop

good, all in all man, keep droppin it.