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lol alot of fuckin shit to read tho... but it was nice as hell... ill as fuck man...
check it, your style was creative, nice piece, your flow was a lil dreary, you could have used a lil more multis up in this piece, but your rhymescheme had me man, you spat nicely with the topic, not bouncy at all... stayed in one place, this was a nice piece, loved reading it... infact i hope to read more, shit was hot...
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