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Forbidden warnings, our country fightin with what happens/
It's sad, seems to think our most intellectual are in straight jackets/
great way to start out a pretty dope piece the content in these two lines is more then most cats put into entire songs so on that big ups
The apocalypse begins, we look deep into our fate/
We draw closer to our downfall, what romans and persians could relate/
The losing side uncovers, the deep of hidden mysteries/
But take a look at our streets, and tell me if you feel our miseries?/
about here is where i really started to feel the flow and the message of the entire piece gave me goose bumps the way you compared ours to ancient societies
Pain is written through, our blood and its veins/
and with poison in our body,how much can it maintain?/
i wasn't really feeling this as an ending it seemed to lack what the rest of the piece had, which is real deep emotion, overall this was a very good drop, keep it up homie
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