man... this was very good.... it's like what i expected after i first read your collab with split soul... only problem was when you got to frontlines i was shocked at how bad you are at battling... i'm still confused.... you got the potential don't know why you're at 0-5.... maybe you're just more interested in this sorta thing and dissing people directly isn't for you.... anyway you got skillz.... looks like you been rapping before this net thing.... keep this shit coming.... alot of ya stuff makes good read.... and i like what i seeing.... i hope if you start battling again your technique is able to match your originality and do justice.... keep up o and please if you could make teh structure more
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that'd be dope....