This was an aight piece considerin you dont know what its about.
I get a picture of fear for some reason im not sure.
Anyway, this stanza was a tight little piece

Crystallized these tears,
More or less prohibited them from falling
Castrisized my fears
And made evil my calling

Like i said i get the picture of fear.
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could you give me some feedback on my piece, called "Sarah"
Thanx