Ok breakdown-

Mentally-
Ill leave you "dead in your tracks" like gun down professional runners//
You "shoot to cock" then swallow like pistols used by prostitute gunners

^^ok opener...not bad...


Your tongue stick to dicks more than toilet paper does to assholes //
Punchin your voice controls, gettin inside your head like exorcist does souls//

^^good multi's-punch didn't hit too hard though.

Im endin your life short like disconnected babies on life support//
Cave your chest then make your lungs distort, send your rhymes "out country" like bein deport//

blah...forced multi's man....

Punches quick to the point like "agility" doctors wit scalpels stabbin patients//
Sendin bullets through your stomach leavin you in the I.C.U. awaitin organ donations//

^^setup bad, nice punch, good multi's...

Its a fact, your chest is like a proboard counter, "open to hits"//
Leavin your head split, your heart is failin to work like bein on strike, or it jus quit//

^^lol nice finisher.

Overall-pretty good verse, som forced multi's here and there....but pretty decent for the most part I suppose......8/10

Tonya-

.....Unlike SANTANA, Mentally Kursed DIPin out-on-his
SET//
.....he STUTTERS-on-the-Mic, his VOICE SKIPPIN Bout-in-his-
NECK//

^DAMN!!!!Nice opener...

when it comes to Wackness, my Skills can't save you Boy//
you tried PEDDLIN Dope but get THROWED-off-da-BLOCK
like a PAPERBOY//

^^Shit, nice punch, setup was good too.....

Word to De-Ja-Vu you get Capped// cause I'll BITCHSLAP
you to FRONTLINES back to BITCHSLAPPED{get it}//ha ha

^^OMG..........That was fuckin nice,


yea you MENTALLY Challenge, I said Fuck you now you
SHOWIN-ME-LOVE//
He says he SMOKE to tha last ROACH, Naw he's just BLOWIN-
A-BUG//

^^fireworks continue....unbelievable....

yea it's ashame bout your skills, now you wishin you had'nt been Born//
cause Battlin me is as Dumb as playin LEAP FROG with
a Unicorn

^^Wow....what a finisher..

Overall-Haven't seen a better verse in a long long time.....wow......10/10

Sorry mentally, she handed it to ya here.

VOte=tonya