I think your topic was dope...I woulda like to of done on this topic

But...

Your Content and styles lacked majorly...there was like one or two multis of the most simplist ones...

Try to improve your rhymes or put more multis in...Keep the lines realting to the topic because i found alot of lines didn't

What you did do well was...

Choose a good topic and have set rhyme schemes with some ok lines

Stay up tWo