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Old 09-23-03, 04:43 PM   #5
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iight

this caught my eye when i first jumped throu it, coz i have a thing for circular poems ( start and end the same ) i dunno why i just do, maybe its the fact that most things you look at can be related some how to a circle, most forms, even life and earth itself. and me im a big belive of reincarnation so maybe coz of that too....anywho ive gotten off track

this piece as said before i dont either think i understand it entirly, but its a simple written piece, and one that leaves alot to be filled out by the reader, so it can comes off different to just about everyone.

my fave 2 lines:
Skies tourn, grounds shaken
people die, and heaven awakens.

i found i had to read it over in someplaces, coz i wasnt really feeling the flow all that well, but thats about it

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