Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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this caught my eye when i first jumped throu it, coz i have a thing for circular poems ( start and end the same ) i dunno why i just do, maybe its the fact that most things you look at can be related some how to a circle, most forms, even life and earth itself. and me im a big belive of reincarnation so maybe coz of that too....anywho ive gotten off track
this piece as said before i dont either think i understand it entirly, but its a simple written piece, and one that leaves alot to be filled out by the reader, so it can comes off different to just about everyone.
my fave 2 lines:
Skies tourn, grounds shaken
people die, and heaven awakens.
i found i had to read it over in someplaces, coz i wasnt really feeling the flow all that well, but thats about it
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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