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Old 09-23-03, 07:23 PM   #6
Derive
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*walks in...time for another awsume breakdown*

13th's Verse:
leader of Omens...^3 posts up already showing Signs of a newb...
at times u explode....but nobody feels the effects of ur magnitude!
^^nice starter...7/10
like Austins wife.....this bitch Feeble is known for abusing Power...
& more fake than dealers subsituting cocaine for All Purpose Flour.
^^lmao...8/10
like steppin on cereal boxes......kid, u just keep pressin ur Luck...
even Chrit wanted 2 ghostwrite this shit....& thats word....what?..
^^nice..7/10
an IR agent...ready 2 ban biters....dawg then start bannin urself..
u was caught bitin the spaghetti line from Duper vs ITouchMyself..
^^lmao...word...dot ever use spaghetti line again ....8/10
damn...even ur aliases got banned..Nick O Teen and also Enhance
see, even if this was Monopoly......u still wouldnt have a Chance...
^^tight..8/10
in Mod Forum ur a constant joke like Brandons feelings on Sand...
no point to get mad cuz if u don't give a fuck we dont give a damn
^^ehhh...not bad 8/10

Total:47/60

Feebles Verse:
i offer a toast - cuz only thing disciples give is the fatherly host
im hotta than most, like mailmen on strike dont bother to post!
^^not bad..6/10
couldn't hit me with personal if you said get ready and look...
but believe me - i'd personal you but theres too many to put!
^^nice..7/10
tryin to make peace, already hes shook, old guys got weak knees
he could design shirts..i still wouldn't pass his treat-tees (treaties)
^^u fucked it up...6/10
dawg..............ya 40...............so getta life! im not messin & fuck
but the moment you posted. . you started pressin ya luck!
^^not bad...but concept is played...7/10
cant defeat me. . u aint renowned for shit, just a confounded vet
ya sig still says blessed with skills.. well, u haven't found em yet..
^^best lines in ur verse...9/10

Total:35/50

60-47=13
50-35=15

Vote:13th Disciple