Overall nice poem....

It had a little complexity ,..Flow..Meta's...

My fav lines:

"Livin' in insanity propetry.
Used us bad like profanity and probably if we remain numskulls we'll for ever be livin' in poverty"

In to disect it..."Used us bad like profanity" Good Metaphor much props...

U still suck lol..j/p...anyways nice well constructed piece...

My only critique...is that the line I picked to be the best...U should come like that with every line....nice work PROPAIN...

IJL...

laters...