Ok Nice topic you have choosen...

Women are far way to dissrespected these days, and they need men like yourself to inspire them with scripts like this...

My fav line was..

"And to be with a woman is a great privilege,

That I take, with the utmost respect and passion,

When I say she is mine, I correct myself,

She isn t mine, a woman is not property,"

Into disect...

"She isn t mine, a woman is not property,"

^ I Believe a women is God's property...not ours...So well put..

Nice poem...my only critque it lacked a little comeplxity but what the heck nice piece...

Laters