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Old 09-23-03, 08:26 PM   #12
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aight fellas i feel sorry for ya cats coz noone will vote coz ya newbs but i'll make exceptions...........
breakdown:-

big pimp=not bad but the struc(dunt matter really) and flow really affected ya verse but i liked tha originality a lot.........praise

toxik=ya got all tha right stuff there jus need to elavate ya punches so that the other rapper actually feels offendeed

overall=bp coz all the origanality came frm him...........peace ya'll

TOXIK=

toxik=ya on tha right trax but ya need