yo i thought that post was pretty good. the topic and content were ok, and the wordplay and vocab were good. i liked the way it ended about her sister, that was chillin, overall that was a good post, keep postin and elevatin man, i enjoyed readin that.

yo if u have the time can u check into my post?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81167
thanx

peace.....