i thought this post was pretty good. like a bunch of other people said u should work on the structure a little, the vocab was ok, the wordplay was good, and the content and topic were semi original. overall id rate it a 7-7.5/10. pretty good post dude. keep postin and elevatin cause i enjoyed readin that.

yo if u have the time can u check out my post?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81167
thanx

peace.....