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Old 09-23-03, 10:48 PM   #9
SummonedTitan
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this batle was too newbish

check it...

insane white boy - you dind't have any multis, metas, punches, but you did have a similie or two, your flow was herbish, but your rhymescheme bounced, creativity lacked, but you came all together staying on point...

young p - your spit was lacking everything man... your punches, metas, multis, similies, creativity and your topic bounced man... you didn't have anything to point out man, you really need to work on this...

both of you need to elevate alot, there wasn't even vocab usage here... coulda used alot of work ya'll... work on this... but if i had to give it to someone, it would be insanewhiteboy

vote - insane